group meeting

Time to improve

The rough cut was complete so we decided it was time for a group meeting to discuss the ways we can change and further improve our thriller.


The main things we will have to change are:
- The clicking sound when the protagonist picks up the photo booth picture of the girl he’s stalking and her boyfriends.
- Shoot more scenes including main couple (Abby and Andy)
- Add more reaction shots so the audience can distinguish the main characters jealousy.
- Replace the scenes when using other couples; include shots more of Abby mainly. This would make it clearer for the audience to realise she is the victim. Most important shot to replace is scene located at school when protagonist hides behind book.
- Elongate and add more titles.
- Elongate shots of girls drowning in the bath, also add more. Mainly in shots in the ‘i love you scene’
- We finally need to edit the sound and make it in time with the shots. Some of the shots are in need of intensifying.