We uploaded and editied all the footage we had and we asked our teacher for their advice. Unfortunately, we were advised to reshoot the whole thing as we used zoom in too many of the shots, creating it to look unrealistic. We were also advised to cut out the drinking scene with the bottle of alcohol as the character doesn’t look the legal age to drink, also it is terribly cliché. It also takes the focus off the obsessiveness of the female character.
We were also advised to cut out the handwriting shots as the hand writing looks too immature and unprofessional; it also kills the build up.
We had a talk after and decided to swap the drinking shots with shots of a photo falling out the scrap book, and him staring and stroking the picture. This would intensify the admiration for the female character whilst still being creepy.
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